Changes Drabble
This is something I wrote for the Changes challenged over at open_on_sunday last week, but was late (stupid inspiration).
Anyway, I thought I'd post it here and see if anyone had anything to say about it. The last line doesn't quite work, so I'd be interested in your opinions.
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Changes – Apr 3, ’05 (unposted due to lateness)
When Buffy needed adoration, she turned to Angel.
When Drusilla needed passion, she turned to Angel.
When Buffy needed respect, she turned to Angel.
When Drusilla needed attention, she turned to Angel.
When Buffy needed adventure, she turned to Angel.
When Drusilla needed compassion, she turned to Angel.
When Buffy needed comfort, she turned to Angel.
When Drusilla needed excitement, she turned to Angel.
When Buffy and Drusilla needed love, they turned to Angel.
Spike was just the runner-up.
“Some things will never change,” Spike mused as he watched his grandsire’s dust float away in the cold Los Angeles dawn.
Anyway, I thought I'd post it here and see if anyone had anything to say about it. The last line doesn't quite work, so I'd be interested in your opinions.
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Changes – Apr 3, ’05 (unposted due to lateness)
When Buffy needed adoration, she turned to Angel.
When Drusilla needed passion, she turned to Angel.
When Buffy needed respect, she turned to Angel.
When Drusilla needed attention, she turned to Angel.
When Buffy needed adventure, she turned to Angel.
When Drusilla needed compassion, she turned to Angel.
When Buffy needed comfort, she turned to Angel.
When Drusilla needed excitement, she turned to Angel.
When Buffy and Drusilla needed love, they turned to Angel.
Spike was just the runner-up.
“Some things will never change,” Spike mused as he watched his grandsire’s dust float away in the cold Los Angeles dawn.