I like the 100 word length - short enough I can do it at work without feeling too guilty (of course, I did all of your suggested edits to that chapter of Death at work, so guilt isn't really an issue for me).

I was trying to contrast Willow's innocence and lack of experience with Giles's knowledge and wisdom, based on the fact that magic had fubar'ed his life quite well in the past. I'll tweak that so it's more clear.

Thanks!