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garnigal ([personal profile] garnigal) wrote2015-09-09 03:20 pm
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Open on Sunday prompt: Burn "Ashes to Ashes: a tale of two short-lived vampires "

She’s always feared (loved) fire.


Fire burns (warms). Fire destroys (brightens). Fire kills (gives life).


It’s only natural to fear (love) it.


But now she can’t be killed - she’s already dead. (But now she can’t be warmed - she’s so cold).


And now she can’t be destroyed - she’s destroyed so much. (And now she can’t stand the light - she’s hidden in the dark).


Now they reach out to touch the flame.


++++++++++++++++++++++


There’s no heat, only burning. There’s no light, only destruction. There’s no life (but there never was).


Ashes to ashes. Dust to dust.


Nothing left but the scent of smoke.

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[personal profile] jerusha 2015-09-09 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I really liked this. Very poetic.

[identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com 2015-09-09 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I originally wrote it more linearly, but decided to play with repetition and word order to see if I could get something interesting.

Glad you enjoyed it.