I fixed it. I'm glad you liked it and oh my god Jordy was so much fun.
I don't like the end - that last piece was the beginning of my original piece, and I lurved it so much I had to put it in somewhere, but... Joss says kill your darlings, and that bit should probably die a quick and painless death.
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Date: 2012-04-21 11:46 pm (UTC)I don't like the end - that last piece was the beginning of my original piece, and I lurved it so much I had to put it in somewhere, but... Joss says kill your darlings, and that bit should probably die a quick and painless death.