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There’s a moment.

After the fruitless hiding is over and you’re found. After the pointless screaming is ended and you’re silenced. After the worthless fighting is done and you’re stilled.

After all that, there’s one last moment.

You already feel dead. Cold and blind, every limb is useless. Even if you were rescued, there would be no way to save you. In this moment, you have a choice.

You have just enough life in you to feel a slim wrist pressed against your mouth, or a drop of blood on your lips. Just enough life to decide whether...

To return.

Date: 2010-04-08 06:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ares132006.livejournal.com
This is super. The imagery is outstanding, as is the sense of doom. And now I'm wondering who it is that is being turned.

Date: 2010-04-09 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks so much Ares. And don't you make me write a follow up! Don't do it!

Damn. Now I wonder too.

Date: 2010-04-09 07:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ares132006.livejournal.com
Follow up, pretty please! *chuckle*
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Date: 2010-04-09 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks so much

Date: 2010-04-08 12:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louise39.livejournal.com
Chilling!

I keep putting different characters in that place. It could be anyone...

Date: 2010-04-09 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks so much!

Date: 2010-04-08 02:24 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jerusha
Oh, that was deliciously creepy.

Date: 2010-04-09 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks J.

Date: 2010-04-09 12:41 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] rahirah
Creepy!

Date: 2010-04-09 02:50 am (UTC)

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