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She dances. A frantic twirl to the song she sings, about a truth only she knows the pain of. Each word is acid-dipped, sinking into the delicate flesh of those she loves.

She dances. A slow sway to the tune that fills her head, about a pain she has buried too long. Each note is barbed wire, flaying her flesh from her bones.

She dances to the magic that’s raising smoke from her feet. She’ll burn from the outside in, still frozen in the center.

Hands hold her still, douse the flames, stop the dance.

No one will burn today.

Date: 2012-01-26 08:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jerusha
I really liked this.

Date: 2012-01-26 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks so much.

Date: 2012-01-26 09:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] alwaysjbj.livejournal.com
Very evocative! I love it.

Date: 2012-01-26 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks so much!

Date: 2012-01-26 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com
Excellent. A great way of describing the scene.

Date: 2012-01-27 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thank you so much.
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Date: 2012-01-27 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks Colleen!

Date: 2012-01-27 08:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ares132006.livejournal.com
Lovely imagery your words invoke.

I love it.

Ares

Date: 2012-01-27 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thank you so much Ares.

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