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Back from my honeymoon and the first thing I had to do was write a drabble for open_on_sunday.
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She was sixteen when he came to town, with his clean, unstained shirts and heavy books in unrecognizable languages.

Her hands were hard and calloused from working in the fields, burned from cooking meals over a wood burning stove. Her clothes were dull from washing, simple and plain in design.

But he said he saw something in her, a bright spark that set her apart from her family and friends. He gave her hope that she wasn’t trapped into this life, made her dream of escape.

And he pressed a stake into her hand and led her into the dark.

Date: 2012-03-03 03:05 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jerusha
I really liked this. Slayers through the ages.

Date: 2012-03-03 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks so much!

Date: 2012-03-03 02:02 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-03-03 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks. :)

Date: 2012-03-03 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com
A fascinating take. Did he do her a favor or not? So hard to tell.

Date: 2012-03-08 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
I suppose that goes for everything everyone does - you never know what you've missed by taking the opportunites you have, be it good or bad.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Date: 2012-03-04 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ares132006.livejournal.com
Oh very well done. Loved the last line.

This was beautifully written. Every word a pearl.

Thank you.

Ares

Date: 2012-03-08 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks Ares!

Date: 2012-03-04 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jmbauhaus.livejournal.com
Very nice. I wish LJ had a "Like" button.

Date: 2012-03-08 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Wouldn't that make life much simpler? I kind of love the Kudos feature in Archive of Our Own, but I also have guilt about using it and not giving a 'real' comment.

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