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“Our Father…”

He sits at his mother’s side, but his attention is fixed on Lil Malick’s skirt, and how it displays her dimpled knees.

“Give us this day…”

He leads the prayer now, his strong voice and strong opinions building a church he can be proud of. He looks out over the congregation, attention caught by a girl in a short skirt.

“Lead us not…”

He travels to spread his message and finds himself trusted. If girls start disappearing when he visits their town, he prays all the harder for the poor lost souls, and leads the search parties.

“Amen.”

Date: 2012-03-17 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slaymesoftly.livejournal.com
Creepily good!

Date: 2012-03-17 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'd been trying to figure out how to use the Lord's Prayer all week, and finally this came to me. It's actually about half the length of the original version, so I'm glad it's still recognizable.

Date: 2012-03-17 02:16 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jerusha
This was chilling--by which I mean awesome.

Date: 2012-03-17 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks. I had another hundred words, but managed to cut it down and still make it creepy.

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