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I've got a couple more for Broken - these ones don't tie into Buffy's diaphragm.

Broken - 1908

She moved silently.

She didn’t notice the shapes moving into position against the shadowed rocks.

She got almost to their den before they surrounded her. Dropping out of the trees she’d thought of as cover, she was surrounded in an instant. No time to run; she wouldn’t have anyway. That was not a maneuver she’d been trained in.

She struck out at them with feet and fists. They snarled; she growled back. It was violent and animal and beautiful. Her enemies dissolved to dust, blood seeped from her wounds. It was close - she might have won.

Her blade snapped.

Broken

He’d been to Kenya once.

They toured old villages, savannah and mountains. In one hidden valley, the brown grasses contrasted against tall white stones. He’d wondered aloud what it was.

His guide explained it was elephant rib bones, curved like cages. The old elephants all came here to die.

That’s what this mess reminded him of. The broken timbers of the old building reached towards the sky, smoking ruins reminding him of cool morning mists. It was beautiful, in a devastating way.

Unseen under the fireman’s protective boots, a sooty and singed paper ripped and tore. ‘Quentin Travers, Watcher’s Council.”

Date: 2006-08-02 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
funny is hard. I can't do it very well, so it's awesome that you are so good at it.

Date: 2006-08-02 02:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] married-n-mich.livejournal.com
Comes from my sarcastic personality.

Date: 2006-08-02 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
I have sarcasm! It just doesn't translate well to paper.

Date: 2006-08-02 03:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] married-n-mich.livejournal.com
You have a dry wit that borders on sarcasm.

Date: 2006-08-02 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
I must tell my parents that. The Garniss's are known for their "dry wit". A newcomer at a Garniss family gathering gets overwhelmed pretty fast.

Plus we don't shut up.

Date: 2006-08-02 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] married-n-mich.livejournal.com
You definitely fit in! No doubt about it.

Date: 2006-08-02 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
You'd be surprised. My Dad, brother and my cousins Paul, Michael and Luke are way faster with a retort than I am. I'm faster than Johnathan, David and Eric though.

Are you starting to get a feel for how many boys I have to deal with. Thank god the boys are old enough to have girlfriends now. Mom, Aunt Jackie, Aunt Mary Edith and I were starting to get nauseated from all the testosterone.

Date: 2006-08-02 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] married-n-mich.livejournal.com
Heh I can imagine you were.

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